BORING COVER LETTER INTRODUCTIONS:
- Please accept my resume in response to …
- In response to the position opening in XYZ …
- With more than X number of years’ experience in XYZ …
- My unique mix of experience and education …
- My experience in X and Y make me the ideal candidate …
Speak to their need.
You know your industry and position better than anyone else. You know what is relevant to the needs of businesses looking for a great candidate who does what you do. Start with an opening line that reflects the fact that you know the needs of their organization and can meet those needs.
Ask a question.
And not just any question either—ask a question you know they’re asking themselves daily, and then answer that question by stating how you’ve successfully addressed the issue with your previous employers.
Relate.
Share how you’ve tackled obstacles for other organizations that would apply to this new opportunity.
Show you’re an overcomer.
Use an example in your cover letter of how you overcame a challenge that directly relates to the new position you’re applying for, and make that connection in your cover letter. State the problem and your solution. Just don’t get long-winded.